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There Was a Naughty Girl

There was a naughty girl And a naughty girl was she, For nothing would she do But hang baubles on her tree. She bought apples and pears Goldilocks and the bears, camels and angels, bows, bells and bangles, and then another to add to the other. She collected with fervor, her only endeavor to adorn her tree to the ninth degree, not knowing too many were worse than not any. So she gazed at her tree and she pondered. She pondered. She gazed at her tree and she pondered. By Joyce 12/10/09 written for Brian's contest.won first place

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Date: 1/9/2013 4:01:00 PM
Joyce, i like the CHRISTMAS PARLOUR theme... enjoyed and thank you for the comment on my poem...pd
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Date: 12/30/2009 11:06:00 AM
Hey, what a cute poem, and congratulations!!
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:57:00 AM
Just to say Joyce I airmailed your prize this morning.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/29/2009 6:12:00 AM
Very cute poem, Joyce ^_^ Super congrats on your first place win ^_^
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Date: 12/26/2009 12:31:00 AM
congratulations Joyce on your well deserved pondering! Robert
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Date: 12/24/2009 8:13:00 AM
Lovely poem Joyce, and a well deserved win in Brian's contest, Merry Christmas >> James
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Date: 12/23/2009 7:18:00 PM
Well deserving success, Joyce! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
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Date: 12/23/2009 5:58:00 PM
Joyce -Congratulations on your first place win in Brian’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/23/2009 2:23:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your first place in in Brian's contest... your poem was an excellent write and well deserved win... my Simply ME on ME won 7th place... happy to share the spotlight with a first prize lady... blessings... luv... happy holidays to u and yours... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/23/2009 1:48:00 PM
Well done! Yikes, what a neat xmas present. BG
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Date: 12/23/2009 12:11:00 PM
great victory and well deserved!! congrats!! Keep the pen flowing!! and may your inspiration shine bright before you.
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Date: 12/23/2009 10:09:00 AM
Congrautlations on your first place win, Joyce. Delightful poem! Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/23/2009 7:35:00 AM
Such a delightful poem, and happily a winner!!! Congratulations dear Joyce, and bet your tree is a winner too!! Merry Christmas!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/23/2009 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joyce! Merry Christmas! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/23/2009 6:37:00 AM
What a delightful tree it would be! Light & Love great win!
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Date: 12/23/2009 1:44:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Joyce.Rgds Brian .My latest contest 'A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR is now open If you care to souplmail me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.
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Date: 12/13/2009 3:06:00 AM
lol. Good one Joyce. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/11/2009 3:57:00 PM
Great job with this poem entry, Joyce! I'm sure this tree is amazing to see! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/11/2009 7:40:00 AM
Nice write, makes you consider the real meaning of Christmas. Thanks for your welcome comments on my write! Merry Christmas 2009 and a Happy New Year 2010 to both you and yours! xx Anna-Marie.
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Date: 12/11/2009 12:32:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Joyce & for your welcome commnts today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:41:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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