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There is a place

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There is a place

There is a place you can go that is full of only love and Warmth .
you will be surrounded by a light that shines from the Heavens ,
Sprinkles of Silver and Gold. 

This place is filled with brilliant colors of Purple , vibrant Gold, all colors.
not one Color is less significant then another ,
for every color is equal here .

This place is surrounded by the beauty of different Flowers.
All flowers have significance here . No one Flower is better then another .
All Flowers are equal here .

It is important you know , you can cry here , and should cry as often as needed .
For  the tears will cleanse your Soul and give the Flowers water to grow.
No  one Tear is insignificant here , every tear has value and not one is better then another .

 money holds no value ,  Where you live , what you own,  has no significance here .

You will be surrounded by a beautiful light that shines from the Heavens .
A shining warm light will encircle you and allow nothing to hurt you . 
Hate will be shed at the door light a old jacket of no use. 

There is a place of beauty and  Worth.
This place will not be found on Earth .
It is a place where no one person is better then another .

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  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:19:00 PM
    Shanity, . ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/18/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Linda, These are contest that bring out a writer in all ~ now I am to judge my contest , finding the poetry , beautiful and extremely hard to judge !
  1. Date: 11/18/2013 12:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on the fine win, Shanity

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/18/2013 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Dr. and I must say , I appreciate your fine entry!
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 11:27:00 PM
    incredible imagination, shanity... warm congrats!..:) huggs

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/18/2013 7:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Nette , your responses bring warm love !
  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:18:00 PM
    this is beautiful, it makes the reader long to travel to that place you speak of...i can see why it is a first place poem...congrats on your win :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/18/2013 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you very much Sandra , I am now just finding these replies !!
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Bravo. :) G.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/7/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I very much appreciate your reading , this was my 1st poem ;)
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:18:00 PM
    nice win......PD

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/17/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my beautiful Sisters in poetry ;) !
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:08:00 PM
    Shanity.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/16/2013 12:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ! This being the very 1st poem I wrote here, sentimental to me.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:45:00 PM
    YVETTE CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 4/30/2014 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much love too you Skat , I have not logged on for some time. All we need is love, love is all we need.
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/17/2013 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I feel honored amongst you all ~ TY !
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:52:00 PM
    Yvette, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/17/2013 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my kind friend , I love your writings, and if I were not so addicted to writing my own ..I would stop for a week and just read in sheer bliss !
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:33:00 AM
    Sounds like a great place! Congrats on your featured poem! I enjoyed this read. Laura :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/14/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you beautiful girl with a warm soul !
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:24:00 AM
    there is a gal here, she is just like the others, beautiful, talented and god-fearing, she is the one who wrote this poem, she is my friend. . . Kelly

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/14/2013 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very beautifully written , that is a honor and I thank -you my friend , Love , yvette
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:20:00 AM
    very good poem like it lots congrats on feature Shadow x smiles

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/14/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Shadow , I have been blessed to be part of such a creative , meaningful place within this site ~
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 1:47:00 PM
    See, there you go, very nice! See this IS the one the world was suppose to see. You did a good job here Yvette, good job. MC

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/31/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're welcome kind lady ;) MC
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/30/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well Thank-you kind sir;)
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Hey if you need some help with a poem post, let me know! MC

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Yvette , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT *

    kelley Avatar mark kelley
    Date: 7/24/2013 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello, would you mind copying and pasting my Poem to your response because my computer is not allowing me to read any of the Poems because of an error. I am embarrased to ask but it would mean a lot to me. Thank you so much again for you comments, Yvette
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/24/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Skat , Thank-you Beautiful ~ It is so encouraging to be validated by such a beautiful young Lady . I will write more , and remember you Friend ! Yvette
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:03:00 PM
    Hi Yvette , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ "

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/24/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Linda ! I have had so many words I want to write , and found this place yesterday , I am grateful that you invite me with Love and welcome ! Your New Friend , Yvette
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:30:00 PM
    - Hello new member: Yvette. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your words here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/24/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I love your name , it says every thing I would love to say back ! Thank-you again, Yvette