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Theme of Birds

On the theme of birds that flutter and fly I’d free my flock of dreams to swarm the sky Blind to both cage and fetter -blinded by sun and freedom of feather

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/26/2010 5:23:00 PM

Hmmmm reminded me of that caged feeling. I wrote something called Precious Fair..you might like. Might you kindly give me a blog comment? Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2010 10:41:00 PM

Samir, this rocks!! If only I were as good in my major of Spanish as you are in your English. I think it's time to add you to my fav poets list! Luv, Andrea

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/12/2010 1:28:00 PM

Sounding good. Are you doing the 29 word form? "I’d free my flock of dreams to swarm the sky" '-blinded by sun and freedom of feather" those are great lines.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/12/2010 1:26:00 PM

lovely write, and is this for the contest? well if so good luck, enjoyed your write..P.D.