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Their Story

I hear voices ,they seem to be from the past and speak to me Always asking me to find the words to tell their story Bereft, I have no words, I can tell no story but my own For the Sijo contest...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:36:00 PM

Barbara, this one is so reflective. Filled with meaning. Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 8:31:00 PM

finest congrats on the cheery win, barbara... awesome! :) huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 3:48:00 PM

Dear LNC, Congratulations on your win in the Sweet Sijo contest! Much love, Carolyn

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/4/2011 1:58:00 PM

Intense one here. Nicely worded expressions.Congrats on your win Barbara. love,gautami

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congrats Barbara!!! great write my dear

Jack Horne

Date: 5/4/2011 1:06:00 PM

Many congratulations on your wins, Barbara : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/4/2011 10:55:00 AM

Nice one Barbara! An inspired one! Thanks for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 10th place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, wish you all the best in life. Adeleke

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 10:33:00 AM

Barbara, it's great to see you in the winner's circle again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2011 5:10:00 AM

Congrats BG on your excellent win in Sweet Sijo contest with this wonderful write and entry on memories so perfectly written..enjoy another wonderful win with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Adeleke, Barbara

Constance La France

Date: 3/19/2011 8:01:00 AM

I really like this Barb, well done, I am happy I viewed it, I have responded to your soup mail~~

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/18/2011 4:15:00 PM

Enjoyed this one very much! Best wishes in the contest! Ellen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2011 8:43:00 AM

Deep and profound, Barbara. We can never accurately convey someone else's story, only our own (if people are willing to listen). An excellent entry for the sijo contest, dear. Wishing you success! Love from your fellow LNC

James Peranteau

Date: 3/18/2011 8:03:00 AM

Great entry dear poet ! It does not seem that you have a loss for write here my friend ! *smiles* much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/18/2011 4:59:00 AM

Beautiful and deep write, Barbara. Soup Mail!!!!!!!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/17/2011 9:04:00 PM

Tjis is very good BG,but I think you do have some beautiful words to tell the story.