Their Eyes

To my daughters Her eyes Searching the stars To share her song, her heart A clearing in the woods, hazel Sofia. Her eyes Like azure skies Reflecting in water Absorbing all that life offers Johanna. Her eyes That cannot lie The goodness that lies Within clouds to water God's fields Stacey. By CarolineCecile

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Matthew Anish

Date: 5/11/2011 11:03:00 AM

Sweet poetry! What did you think of my poems on moontown cafe? Yours Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2011 12:12:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Caroline. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2011 8:49:00 AM

Dear Caroline, you have six remarkable children. I wish I could meet them. It seems that each has some of your fine qualities. What a lovely way to spend Mothers Day, writing of your children. Hope you had a wonderful weekend! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/9/2011 7:12:00 AM

This is a beautiful tribute to your daughters Caroline.. A sign of love omnipresent.. I quite enjoyed this write of yours.. Loads of smiles while reading it :) enjoy the week ahead

Don Johnson

Date: 5/9/2011 12:36:00 AM

Yes Caroline indeed you paint a picture ... the eyes that cannot lie... azure eyes like timeless skys if eyes do lock a fixture xo Yes Jesus had several incarnations from Adam, Hermes Aaron with Moses and had directly influenced religions of many faiths including Buddism over the centuries. Basically aimed at peace and the non murder of your neighbour love n light Don

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/8/2011 9:13:00 PM

* “Sophia * Johanna * & * Stacy * Beautiful Qualities Also But * Sooo Much Gentler * Beautiful CarolineCecile” * tis is a double treat this night to find * “Your Sweeetened Glow” * melodies and gratefulness and truth and goodness * “Smile * Your Beautiful Light Is Bright” * six children amid sooo joy and to believe and know that * “Eternal Bliss Awaits Their Precious Hearts” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah