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The Zenith of My Prime

The zenith of my prime has come and gone and here I sit and wait my setting sun with dreams and wishes longing to come true I won't lie down in death till they are through I've yet to taste the glory of those lips of love divine, I've only taken sips the Warrior Princess, yet remains inside a seething muse that I am forced to hide I've yet to write the world into a rhyme to go on after me, defying time I've yet to travel to enchanted place and live a thousand lives and dance with grace I've yet to swim like mermaid in the sea with not a single thing to cover me I've yet to lie on sands in twilight hue to feel the naked rush of feelings new I've yet to sing my song and feel the praise of hands that lift me high and lights that daze I've yet to gaze upon what eyes adore my gypsy heart has treasure still in store And so, this pain that dwells in me yet screams: "You must not die until you've lived your dreams. Uncover dreams: bring every one to light Oh, live and love and blaze before the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/11/2016 3:12:00 PM
Oh this is absolutely beautiful, Eileen, and your recital gives it added strength, for it flows naturally and sincerely. We need to believe in our dreams; if not they will flounder before reaching shore! Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/10/2016 9:37:00 AM
You seem to have dissapeared, I hope you are okay. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/9/2016 1:32:00 AM
Very deep & meaningful. U set a very high zenith hhere. Enjoyed.A7...,..........//Hugs
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Date: 10/8/2016 12:06:00 AM
It sounds like you have a lot to look forward to. This is an exceptional piece! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:58:00 AM
WoW! Elieen, I really enjoy your poetry. One can't help but to be moved, encouraged, motivated and inspired by your pen. I think about the dreams "locked" inside and they need to come out! This piece reminded of that. My poetic friend I'll be wishing on a "star"that all of your dreams come true. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS. Now I'm going to go listen to it.
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:27:00 AM
I think at some point we realize some dreams will remain dreams, Eileen. There's nothing wrong with that, but time and money leave lots of dreams unfulfilled. I love your beautiful poem. I hope all of your dreams come true:)
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Date: 10/7/2016 4:35:00 AM
Superb ...
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Date: 10/7/2016 12:21:00 AM
First I read it, then listened to you read it... It is good the way you narrate. Excellent... Really enjoyed/|\
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