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The Wishing Tree

If I chanced upon a wishing tree Where I could shuffle through the leaves And find the wishes ripe for picking Could choose not one... or two,....but three... I would want to take the best with me Not wealth,...or fame...or riches grand But hold three other wishes in my hand... If the power were granted me To break out of my shell Where my imagination wouldn't fail On the doors of my child within If the sky was clear enough And the water still enough If I could step out of my skin To be old...or to be young again So I could see the world through another's eyes And understand a different sky If the knowledge were given me To erase all negativity And have the courage to climb my tree Where I could clearly see that in tomorrow There would lie a place where peace would be I would relish the fruits.....from my wishing tree _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ For Amy Green's contest "Three Wishes"

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Date: 4/28/2010 10:41:00 PM
Wow, this sure is an inspiring poem, Carrie :) I'm sure it would do so well in the contest :) maybe you can also spare me some of the fruits of your wishing tree? Loved your wishing tree, wonderfully done :)
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:43:00 PM
gorgeous! yes! the victory string will continue! must be a soup record! jimbo
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Date: 4/21/2010 6:47:00 PM
Another winner, I just know it. marvelous, CArrie . I wish I'd thought of this. I never mailed you your book yet becasue when soup mail was down, I could not see your address that I had saved in my soupmail. I will go there now to make sure it is still there! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:22:00 PM
WOW ... outstanding writing here, Carrie and definitely the winner in my book ... my muse is on vacation I guess ... I can't get inspired by much this week ... smile ... and with writing like this I wouldn't even enter this one ... LOL ... this is going onto my favorites list for sure!!
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:05:00 PM
neat poem... enjoyed
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:10:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, have a good one..p.d.
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