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The Windmiller's Lady

The day was warm and sweet with spring no breeze came to tease me. I'd wondered what my love would bring I'd wondered. "Where could he be?" His mill stood high upon the hill a short ride from my home, a picnic planned would be a thrill but that man would not roam. I grabbed my bonnet, left the shawl and out the door I ran, perhaps, he had forgotten all no sense of time that man. I found him on the windmill's walk staring at the gilded sea, clay pipe in hand he watched a flock dazed in silent reverie. He smiled at me and cocked his head and said love, "Don't you agree?" what better place to share our bread, "Have you brought lunch for me?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/13/2014 1:20:00 AM
Lovely write Debbie ! Congrats on top win !!
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:17:00 PM
congrats to you Debbie. Very nice picture painted here with your words.
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:07:00 PM
This is my favorite so far in this read. Congratulations, Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/11/2014 5:54:00 PM
Way to go with this great winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/11/2014 11:45:00 AM
nice win....SKAT
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Date: 3/11/2014 9:24:00 AM
- Theme - "Spring Fever" contest: - Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem, Debbie !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2014 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Debbie, isn't that just like a man? Well-done on poem and honor thereof.
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Date: 3/11/2014 3:37:00 AM
Debbie, I congratulate you on the win.... :)s and hugs... Verlena
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Date: 3/11/2014 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed this brilliant piece, debbie
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Date: 3/28/2013 9:34:00 PM
enjoyed your poem..Linda
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Date: 3/25/2013 2:54:00 PM
I really really liked yours a lot, Deb. It was one of the most entertaining ones. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this !! Lunch on the walk of the lighthouse does indeed sound nice. Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 3/25/2013 7:22:00 AM
sweet picture, Debbie, in perfect cadence. love, Kathy
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Date: 3/24/2013 2:05:00 PM
How 'bout homemade sun-dried tomato hummus with fresh wild thimbleberries for desert?
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:10:00 AM
Awwwww! Miss Pitty Patt you are so practically romantic. 'The way to a man's heart is through his stomach!' Lol. Lovely story. Love you bunches. Scarlet
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Date: 3/22/2013 7:48:00 AM
I "breathe in" every word ....... GORGEOUS! - Thanks Debbie, have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/21/2013 11:18:00 AM
This is so cool just like you xx
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Date: 3/20/2013 4:31:00 PM
Debbie; i love this. it's so unique. but you forgot his lunch. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/20/2013 3:35:00 PM
I LOVE how you did yours. Quite different from my take on that same picture too. Love how yours had a humorous slant! that's funny DAvid asking what contest this is for!!! he is not paying attention. ahahha
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Date: 3/20/2013 3:27:00 PM
Debbie this is the second one I have read with this title is there a contest? if so you have a strong entree for it....David
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