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The Windmiller's Guest

The woman he has waited long to see has come to visit him at last! She rests against the rail as he stands nervously and keeps his gaze from going to her breasts. Her modest dress cannot hide from the gent the maid’s allure! He wishes he could still his pounding heart. Oh, she is heaven sent! To see her in his own world is a thrill. For here she now stands, where he often stood and looked out to the valley where she dwelt. He breathes spring air, and everything is good. Such joy before this time he’d never felt! The young man and fair maiden chat a while, but hardly does he hear her words because he only sees her mesmerizing smile, her eyes, her skin. . . He’s blind to any flaws! Night’s shadows soon will fall. He reads her eyes and knows that she, like he, can feel the heat between them, and before they part, she’ll sigh - the moment when he'lll taste two lips so sweet. *See the picture that inspired this poem on Isaiah Zerbst Contest page

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  1. Date: 4/3/2013 4:59:00 PM
    Oh , you know I like this ;} Yes there is a Lilith vampire. She was Adams first wife. She did not want to bow down to Adam. Look it up on the net, you'll like ;}

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Lol! You are such a romantic. :) I like where you went with yours. I grasped on the symbolisms in the pic. thanks for visiting me Andy. Hour comments are always so encouraging for me!! Love you bunches Deb

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:30:00 AM
    hmmm lol..looking at her bosums is he? I think he's a bit randy and not at all a gent! Light & love

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:14:00 PM
    A sweet romantic story Andrea. Nice. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Sweet, romantic and full of desire....wonderful write! Soupmail

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Oh Andrea, this is amazing, so amazing,, i just love reading your poetry, when you are in this mood..wonderful!!!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:41:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Great work..Very imaginative idea..Thanks for stopping by..I don't know exactly when I will be able to finish my work started " The Visit"...Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Truly a match made in heaven. Heaven is probably a bed chamber, eh? Isn't it romantic? Remember the song - or are you too young? Dear Andrea, just your usual great opus. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:10:00 AM
    Very poetic a write Andrea, you paint the picture though your words so well. sure winner here. Well done!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:04:00 AM
    Andrea this matches the picture very well, good luck...David

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:04:00 AM
    P.S. This write goes so well with my write: In mine depths. Once again dear poet....great write ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:49:00 AM
    What a wonderful write Andrea ! And I knows ya knows that this is my nature of poetic thought. Great write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week my friend......much love, james

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Very, very good. I know that you'll do good in the contest. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:34:00 PM
    wonderful write wishes

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:24:00 PM
    A picture paints a thousand words and sometimes the opposite, as we witness here. Thank you for your comment on my effort. Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Such passion rythes beneath what appears innocent. I think she should be careful, that railing doesn't look that sturdy. :) A beautiful romantic possability, you've let your curiosity create.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:50:00 PM
    An excellent romantic story you weaved for the picture prompt. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:21:00 PM
    An enchanting romantic write Andrea. Amazing! Thanks for your comment on my Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are right about beauty being ephemeral. I didn't use the word in my poem for syllable restriction.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:33:00 AM
    love this gem, my friend - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:13:00 AM
    just masterful! i don't even need to see the picture to imagine it perfectly...