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Life is Death is knots A box of thoughts Innate Is not that above? A twisted thing to ponder Staring at A wilted rose by the casket out yonder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/1/2015 9:26:00 PM
Short, but packing a big punch! WOW! Love it! Pandita
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Date: 7/1/2015 11:17:00 AM
I thought I was going to see a poem about the lovely tree...do you think Ms. Kilmer would kill me? :-) Anyway, what else do I say? There's your thoughts in knots as Death and twisted as pondering about a wilted rose by the casket. The same old cleverness, the same old perfection...ah I'm getting jaded by all these excellence...
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:59:00 AM
Arthur, so darkly beautiful 7 and I love the image and thanks for visiting my poem, fourth of July
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Hugs!
Date: 6/30/2015 2:56:00 AM
A wonderful write.........A.M.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thank you for your double vote of compliments! :)
Date: 6/29/2015 7:47:00 PM
Love the picture, love the poem even more!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 6:48:00 PM
Thank you King!
Date: 6/29/2015 1:51:00 PM
I enjoy this short poem you wrote, Arthur. Love the ending of it, a wilted rose.... My!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 6:38:00 PM
Why thank you Andrea! hugs
Date: 6/29/2015 7:18:00 AM
Wow, I like it, a twisted thing to ponder... Oh this was very intriguing to read...hugs xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 6:28:00 PM
Thank you dear Casarah my poet from the graveyard!
Date: 6/29/2015 3:42:00 AM
What an uplifted write, full of imagery. Excellent............A.M.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Afolabi
Date: 6/28/2015 11:35:00 PM
The box brings many thoughts.... Celebrate his life my friend
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Tim

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