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The Wind

From my lips Songs of love In the wind Wind catches Garden gate A rhythm Slow dancing With the wind Daffodils For the "Ellip" contest..

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K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 5/27/2013 5:55:00 PM

deeply spirited!

David Williams

Date: 3/7/2013 1:19:00 PM

belated congrats on your win...David

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/5/2013 8:18:00 AM

Listening to the wind now..as March howls it's voice !! Love the rhythm of the objects in the poem... Congrats on your win !!

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 3/5/2013 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win with this amazing write! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 2:03:00 AM

Congrats on your HM Barbara , I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/4/2013 12:04:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win, Barbara. Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2013 10:13:00 AM

Barbara, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/4/2013 7:14:00 AM

Sweet! Congrats on your win. Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 9:59:00 PM

Warmest congrats on this super win BG.

... Gigno

Date: 2/28/2013 8:38:00 PM

!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/23/2013 10:32:00 AM

This is a fabulously wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a supreme piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!