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The Wind

the wind swept across my face and touched me with a touch as light as a feather kissing me like a tropical breeze taunting and teasing me until we feel again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/10/2008 8:40:00 PM
oooooh~ Yummy~! Great imagery~Taking the reader so quickly with such few words leaves me w/ a greater enticement!~LOVED it! You have a beautiful talent and your words fly off the page with glimmering glee~(he he he);) Very extraordinary poetry darling~ Thanks for mentioning it so I could read it...I enjoy your company and comments (constructive as well) I always think I can do better after I reread some of my work...I ask U...please critique my work for better words etc~! Your soupie buddy~me :)
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