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The Willow

Though the lightning comes Though the thunder roars The willow still remains. Though the rain pounds down Though the wind howls round The willow stands the pain. The weather tries to hurt Tries to bring it down But never has the luck. It tries and tries For the willow’s soul But from its roots it cannot pluck. It doesn’t realize Causing pain Cannot outlast the fight. The fight to stay Rooted in The ground with all your might.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/21/2012 3:31:00 PM
Be strong willow
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Date: 10/6/2012 11:30:00 PM
Monique, check out how your first poem looks to other people by going to VIEW. For some reason, there is no comment box coming up for us. It's too bad. I really enjoyed the bio of yours and wanted to tell you so. So I'll tell you here. and you are a GREAT poet, as this one shows me too.
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Date: 10/8/2012 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. Do you know of a way to change the VIEW so there is a comment box?

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