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The Wildflower

It could have been you Hiding behind the post Stretching out your arms Your tiny face upturned To the early morning sun Waving at me softly While swaying with the breeze It was only wishful thinking... But you look so much the same that I walked a little closer and nearly called your name A scent so very subtle Drifted through the air Reminding me of the last time I tied a ribbon in your hair I picked the wildflower for you But you’re much too far away Shall wilt before you see it This one I picked today Against the velvet petals You won’t get to press your face But together we will pick the one That grows up in its place I’ll save this in our special book Pressed between the pages And hide it in our secret place We’ve known about for ages The next time that you come again.... You’ll know right where to look!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/24/2011 7:15:00 PM
I love it! Just a great story and the way you have it on paper is so special.
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Date: 3/31/2011 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:59:00 AM
This is such a beauty, Julie! Wow I am so impressed, not only with the layout but with your touching poem as well-- really enjoyed this one :D
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Date: 3/29/2011 3:04:00 PM
Beautiful, Julie. Many congrats on this wonderful feature of the week. Elaine
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Date: 3/28/2011 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Julie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Julie. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations..I like the shape..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 10:40:00 AM
Thank you so much! I was so excited to learn I had been featured!
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations Julie on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:29:00 PM
a fun lyric to read, enjoyed,..P.D.
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