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The Waterfall

natural staircase water forms moving carpet ushering nature

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Date: 5/16/2014 9:18:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/17/2014 5:19:00 AM

I appreciate your applause and guidance in my writing skill Dr. Ram Mehta! :)

Date: 5/16/2014 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations, Linda x

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/17/2014 5:18:00 AM

Thank you for your applause Linda!

Date: 5/16/2014 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! lori

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/17/2014 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Lori!

Date: 5/15/2014 10:13:00 PM

Nicely done

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/16/2014 5:02:00 AM

Thank you Mark! :-)

Date: 5/15/2014 9:28:00 PM

I like how you made this a metaphor. Congrats on your HM.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/16/2014 5:01:00 AM

Thanks so much for your applause Andrea! ^_^

Date: 4/30/2014 6:23:00 AM

Beautiful write with nice images. Please give once over to the syllable counts if it's for a contest. Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/30/2014 7:06:00 AM

Oh, sorry for the name mishap. Thanks for checking on my poem Dr. Ram Mehta. I will revise it.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/30/2014 6:29:00 AM

Thanks Gerald! :)

Date: 4/30/2014 5:29:00 AM

Liked that moving carpet...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/30/2014 7:03:00 AM

Thanks Gerald! :)