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The Waterfall

A hugh giant tear Water pouring from the rock Weeps for America

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/1/2009 11:25:00 AM
Kool Haiku Sara>>James
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Date: 8/31/2009 6:48:00 AM
good imagery mom, have a good day
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Sara..I am Jamaican by birth.
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:35:00 AM
I like your "giant tear weeping for America". It could be sybolic for all America, North and South. And thank you for your comment on "Lost tracks". Gert
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:33:00 AM
This is very interesting.
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