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The Wall

THE WALL I stood up straight,I stood up tall, As I took those final steps to "The Wall". My hands were shaking,my eyes were blurred, And,in my heart,my soul,I heard; Tell my wife,tell my son,tell my Father too. I left my blood in a foreign land, As my country asked me to. Don't grieve for me,I'm long past pain, but I know the hurt is there. Just remember what WAR has done,to people everywhere. We're all here together now,the friends And the foes. We've all got something to tell you, And this is how it goes. The spark of life,in us ALL,was given us by God. Who is man,to take it away,by gun,by knife,by rod? I shook my head,I started to cry,I wondered if it was real. I felt the pain of a million souls,my stomach had a chill. I knew then,what it was,that made me come here now. It hit me hard,those words I heard,and so I made this vow. I'll do my best,to give the word,to every one that listens. When man makes war,and kills his brothers, Rapes and plunders,and imprisons, The final days up in Heaven,we are all together. Right or wrong,no matter the cause,we are ALL linked, Held by Gods sacred tether.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/4/2016 8:25:00 PM
nice to see this one again. skat
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:06:00 PM
Dana This is a powerful and deep write. I can feel the pain and emotion from beginning to end. Nice job Welcome to the Soup.
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:37:00 AM
Great, Dana! Welcome to poetrysoup! All the best my new souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/6/2013 2:56:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Dana ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:28:00 AM
Hi Dana, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2013 10:53:00 PM
Dana, enjoyed the free verse poem... strong imagery ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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