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The Walk We Take

Genteel hearts, unscathed by ways of hate May surely walk through heavens gates

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Date: 2/14/2010 2:04:00 PM

Hope to walk through those gates some day. Good use of contrast in the two lines to convey your message. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 10/20/2009 11:39:00 PM

Lovely crystalle Adell one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/7/2009 4:57:00 PM

so very lovely!..smooth.......right! Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 10/1/2009 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful understand in this wonderful Crystalline. So shall Genteel hearts, void of hate, enter the gates. Sincerely Moses

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/24/2009 2:44:00 PM

Let us hope that eventually loses out to love. Keep 'em coming Yours Matthew Anish

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/21/2009 2:39:00 PM

Great feeling here, Adell! And thanks for your comments. Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/20/2009 5:59:00 AM

Adell, excellent writing. And I do believe you are correct in your feeling in this one. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/20/2009 4:18:00 AM

The way we live our life on earth gives us a shot at the pearly gates.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2009 3:51:00 AM

Love it. On earth and heaven also. Keep writing. Sara