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The Walk To Work

The copper coloured leaves like rain fall. Carpeting the floor better than the finest Axminster. Every hue of yellow and brown just lay there. Cushioning that dreaded walk to work. Leaving skeletons silhouetted against the sky To scare you on the way home, when autumn's sun has set . It's raining like the gods are crying at summers passing and seagulls dance against the pencil grey sky. The grey slates on roof tops shine with autumn's rain as you walk into work to begin yet another day.

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Date: 11/16/2016 2:26:00 PM
I agree w/San, the tapestry of words is gorgeous. You paint a picture w/words very well, Stephen. There is often beauty in the mundane, if we look beneath the surface. Lovely poem, my new poetic friend. RW (Romantic Warrior)
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Date: 11/16/2016 3:20:00 PM
very nice of you freddie to say so , yeah just a walk to work stephen

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