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Two Worn Shoes

two worn shoes await the joyful youth that filled them. . . wait to just feel life.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/13/2012 9:21:00 AM

this is really good Andrea, says such a lot, one of your specials is this. harry

Kash Poet

Date: 2/5/2011 10:37:00 AM

This one is a wonderful work from you Andrea!You have captured so much!--kash

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/27/2010 7:12:00 AM

hello there and so sorry for the delay. congrats on your well deserved win here - awesome senryu! thanks so much for your kind congrats on Breathless. no, not back, just trying to enter a contest here and there. warmest wishes to you, shar xo

Kim M

Date: 4/20/2010 9:50:00 AM

Very well done! Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 7:16:00 AM

Congrats Andrea in your placement and win in Raul's exciting contest.. enjoy your win for this wonderful write my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/20/2010 4:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Still Life Andrea. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/20/2010 2:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win here Andrea. My computer is moving so slow, I may just give up for the night. So glad you won with this great Senryu. love, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 4/19/2010 2:25:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your win in Raul's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2010 12:37:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations with your placement in my contest...Raul

Marty Owens

Date: 4/18/2010 12:18:00 PM

Love your interpretation...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2010 2:01:00 AM

Interesting way to go with the picture.. Good luck in the contest....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for the choice of my poem....I know that it is not easy to choose from all the poems that are entered....Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 4/17/2010 11:45:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comment Andrea Rgds Brian

David Byrne

Date: 4/17/2010 11:01:00 PM

good luck in the contest!

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/17/2010 5:52:00 PM

The memories some shoes must have, the places they have been. not all OLD things need thrown away. :) :) nicely written... luv Margaret

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/17/2010 3:08:00 PM

very nice write good luck in the contest and thank you for your always sweet comments faleshia

Daver Austin

Date: 4/17/2010 2:41:00 PM

Sounds like fat me during the big depression. Love it! About dreams. This one you probably haven't had, but, honest to Jaaayzzuss, I've had this dream a couple of times...I'm naked, trying to hide behind a music stand. I'm supposed to play the Sibelius Violin Concerto, but cannot remember how it starts, plus, I can't find my lousy fiddle. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/17/2010 2:39:00 PM

Good luck Andrea in the new contest by Raul.. great Senryu for the photo ... luv your title too.. we got the same flow here... mine is "Anticipation" ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Skat A

Date: 4/17/2010 2:00:00 PM

Enjoyed nice write for the contest, Andrea. Good luck!