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The Void That Was You

My vessell; filled with
emptiness of a black whole.
The void that was you.
My tears shall be in number;
every drop of rain hence forth.
02/10/15 Contest: Tanka tears Sponsor: Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/23/2015 10:26:00 PM
Boy, you lift the heart and you break it too. You're so good at both.
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Date: 2/20/2015 4:01:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2015 9:58:00 PM
WOW, this one is my favorite so far... luv LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:54:00 PM
Arlene, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 . Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/15/2015 2:55:00 PM
Well done with this sad Tanka, Arlene! The void can be felt in your words. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:35:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2015 7:42:00 AM
This is precious. Every time we lose someone it leaves an empty space in our hearts.
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Date: 2/11/2015 5:15:00 AM
Such a sad write... nice entry for the contest ... lov,nad!
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Date: 2/10/2015 1:46:00 PM
Beautiful tanka poem! Well done!
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Date: 2/10/2015 1:37:00 PM
so deep and sorrowful - great poem for the contest - good luck:-) Hugs jan xx
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