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The Violin

I can’t believe that you are mine now I can practice every day. My heart does with your strings entwine I can’t believe that you are mine. Today I’m floating on cloud nine and this is where my heart will stay, I can’t believe that you are mine now I can practice every day. Today I played with all my heart then teacher laid you in my arms. I know that we will never part today I played with all my heart, which got me into Juilliard. We wooed them all with magic charms, today I played with all my heart then teacher laid you in my arms. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 12.26.2014 Contest: Let The Music Play On

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/9/2015 5:44:00 PM

Fantastic and artful piece!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/7/2015 10:18:00 AM

My goodness! Just finished reading Andrea's and I can't figure out which I like better. They are both brilliant, capturing the soul and feeling of the painting. Keep the music coming, little girl!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2014 1:16:00 AM

A very creative and beautiful entry Brenda! Sure this one will do well I the contest.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/31/2014 9:14:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2014 3:22:00 PM

wow, you did some perfect Tri- o - let -ing with this set!!! WELL DONE. I expect to see this in a winners' circle!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/29/2014 6:46:00 PM

Then I wish you were judge then it would be a sure thing. :-). Thank you Andrea.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/29/2014 8:41:00 AM

Just wonderful. Light & Love & Happy New Year

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/29/2014 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Debbie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2014 2:35:00 PM

- Dear Brenda, what beautifully write !!! - Good luck in the contest, hoping it will result in a win - I wish you and your family a peaceful and happy new year - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/29/2014 6:44:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise