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The Ultimate Sin

Relaxing in a country Inn with plenty on my mind sipping on gin with a great big grin, I was destine to make him mine. An hour or two was sure to prove true that he was up to something, but he sat there waiting while anticipating hoping that I was too. From across the room our hearts were in tune guessing what each one was thinking, but if he only knew or had a clue that I am going to seduce him. Our eyes were locked and he was shocked to see what I had for him, my lips were wet and breasts erect oblivious to anyone knowing. I clinched my teeth around my drink, finishing with one last swallow, It didn't take him long to see that I was ready to follow. We ended this night each with delight,never to speak again and I''ll always regret..but never forget,that on this night I committed a sin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 5:14:00 AM
Bravo, go out and live girl - awesome Donna>>James
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:10:00 PM
I don't understand why you consider this action sinful. If he was married maybe, otherwise this seems pretty normal in human to human interaction. I like the bodily imagery you use. It carries the seduction through your words.
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:47:00 PM
This is an eye opener. Very good write I must say. descriptive also.
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