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The Ultimate Disciple

Lean on one pressed between two Draw history better than me and you Blood and bone Never works alone Say with no sound Mark steps on flesh and ground Though has no heart or ears Know all beats and fears Never break a promise nor tell a lie Though always kiss to tell good-bye Believe whatever you say And move only to obey Best friend faithful slave Always die thirsty and brave

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Date: 8/18/2021 2:38:00 PM
Nice poem Mohamed. I liked how the poem told the story, then came to an intense, abrupt ending. Take care, Jess :)
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/20/2021 12:28:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment . I always have this passionate to my dear loyal Pen. I think pen is the twin of every writer and should be appreciated .....
Date: 9/28/2012 5:50:00 PM
Good work. I enjoyed it, Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/27/2012 11:35:00 AM
Good rhyming in this write.
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