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The ultimate disciple

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The ultimate disciple

Lean on one pressed between two
 Draw history better than me and you
  Blood and bone
   Never works alone
     Say with no sound
      Mark steps on flesh and ground
       Though has no heart or ears 
         Know all beats and fears
          Never break a promise nor tell a lie
            Though always kiss to tell good-bye 
              Believe whatever you say
               And move only to obey 
                Best friend faithful slave
                  Always die thirsty and brave

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:50:00 PM
    Good work. I enjoyed it, Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 11:35:00 AM
    Good rhyming in this write.