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The Twinkling

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The Twinkling

The Twinkling


above
the hazy moon
night time whispers stories
shooting stars race in close to hear
and wink

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  1. Date: 3/14/2010 5:43:00 AM
    I like the whimsical feel of this cinquain. James MG., Very nice. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 1:56:00 PM
    Very nice Jimmy! Tonia and I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 12/15/2009 2:14:00 PM
    What a sky to behold and view in your superb poem James >>

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 6:54:00 PM
    Awesomely cool Cinquain, james, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 12/12/2009 10:43:00 AM
    This a really cool inspiring cinquain, James! Got alot of respect for this one. -Robert

  1. Date: 12/12/2009 7:31:00 AM
    Oh, so charming. Great short write. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 7:35:00 PM
    Very nice...enjoyed..Marty

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 5:18:00 PM
    Wowser #1 on the top hundred..you must be struttin' Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 11:04:00 AM
    This poetry Sir is remarkable to the burst of energy one has when trying to explane nature to a loved captive audiance !! Love this write !!!!! james into mine favs with this !

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 6:55:00 AM
    This poem sparkles like the stars. Very nice. (soupmail) Love to you, James, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 6:35:00 AM
    Wish this one went on and on and on ... smile ... how beautiful and definitely the beginning of a children's story ... smile ... Hope you have a wonderful holiday James and 2010 is a blessed year for your and yours!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 4:18:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery you have painted with words here. The night sky is so awesome! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 6:00:00 PM
    Beautiful cinquain Jimbo with great words flowing .. wait... I just thought I saw a star wink at me... great line... enjoyed... blessings. .. luv ... thankxxx for enjoying and reading my poetry too... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" Poetry Soup

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 4:56:00 PM
    So pretty and sweet! This is a beaut, jimbo :-)

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 10:09:00 AM
    Unique and witty James, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 5:40:00 AM
    nice imagery, cool poem

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 10:18:00 PM
    What a beauty,im in love with those shooting stars,Can i make a wish?awesome indeedmafavourite--Charma

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 8:56:00 PM
    How nice! What a thought and a great image. I am inspired. I am goign to try write one of those too. Thanks for sharing, Jim! Caroline.

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 8:19:00 PM
    A beautiful Cinquain! Going into my favorites! Love Light Patricia