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The Twinkling

above the hazy moon night time whispers stories shooting stars race in close to hear and wink

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/25/2022 9:27:00 PM

"night time whispers stories" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/14/2010 5:43:00 AM

I like the whimsical feel of this cinquain. James MG., Very nice. Smiles, Dane Ann

Craig Hammond

Date: 1/4/2010 1:56:00 PM

Very nice Jimmy! Tonia and I enjoyed it.

James Fraser

Date: 12/15/2009 2:14:00 PM

What a sky to behold and view in your superb poem James >>

John Freeman

Date: 12/13/2009 6:54:00 PM

Awesomely cool Cinquain, james, Sincerely, Moses

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/12/2009 10:43:00 AM

This a really cool inspiring cinquain, James! Got alot of respect for this one. -Robert

Daver Austin

Date: 12/12/2009 7:31:00 AM

Oh, so charming. Great short write. Love, daver

Marty Owens

Date: 12/9/2009 7:35:00 PM

Very nice...enjoyed..Marty

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2009 5:18:00 PM

Wowser #1 on the top hundred..you must be struttin' Light & Love

James Peranteau

Date: 12/8/2009 11:04:00 AM

This poetry Sir is remarkable to the burst of energy one has when trying to explane nature to a loved captive audiance !! Love this write !!!!! james into mine favs with this !

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/8/2009 6:55:00 AM

This poem sparkles like the stars. Very nice. (soupmail) Love to you, James, Dane Ann

Sue Mason

Date: 12/8/2009 6:35:00 AM

Wish this one went on and on and on ... smile ... how beautiful and definitely the beginning of a children's story ... smile ... Hope you have a wonderful holiday James and 2010 is a blessed year for your and yours!!

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/8/2009 4:18:00 AM

Beautiful imagery you have painted with words here. The night sky is so awesome! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/7/2009 6:00:00 PM

Beautiful cinquain Jimbo with great words flowing .. wait... I just thought I saw a star wink at me... great line... enjoyed... blessings. .. luv ... thankxxx for enjoying and reading my poetry too... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" Poetry Soup

Corinne Curcio

Date: 12/7/2009 4:56:00 PM

So pretty and sweet! This is a beaut, jimbo :-)

John Freeman

Date: 12/7/2009 10:09:00 AM

Unique and witty James, Sincerely, Moses