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The Truth

I woke up not feeling myself Although it’s how I know That this day is like any other It’s still impossible to asunder Drugs, death, it’s just a game Even my name We fight There’s no light I have no sight How can I be released? All I want is peace…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/15/2009 12:23:00 PM
Ciara, i am truly enjoying your poems, you are a good writer>>James
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Date: 7/9/2009 7:11:00 AM
True! indeed truth does not lie! nice simple piece
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Date: 7/9/2009 7:05:00 AM
True! indeed truth does not lie! nice simple piece
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Date: 7/9/2009 4:26:00 AM
Ciara, this poem is very sad but an awesome write. I hope you will keep writing and sharing with us. And please do read and leave comments for the other poets here at the Soup.By reading others you receive inspiration. Likewise when the other poets read yours you may give them inspiration. It is a beautiful cycle here and a family of wonderful poets here to help and enjoy. Love, Carol
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