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The Truest Heart Is a Wall Made of Steel

It's not easy to realize when everything seems real that the truest heart is a wall made of steel, foolish me....I have tried for too long to melt it down without considering it couldn't be done! The truest heart is a wall made of steel, who can ever bend the strongest will? My time was wasted by chasing a rainbow that vanished through bright clouds, and it was supposed to last longer to vow me until evening brought in its stars! The truest heart is a wall made of steel, who can ever bend the strongest will? It would be lovely to have you beside me.... not thinking the truest heart is a wall made of steel; isn't temptation a desire that has a delusive feel? You are faithful to one, I am full of vanity! Love your sweetheart and forget me... I've tried to deceive you by falling in love too quickly; you have chosen him over me by hurting me, it was by accident you mentioned your devotion to him, but this doesn't please me. The truest heart is a wall made of steel, who can ever bend the strongest will? Entered in Debbie Gucci's, contest," Song Of Poetry " Inspired by the song, " I can't make you love me if you don't " Notation: Don't make the mistake of falling in love too quickly... ask if the other person is already committed to another... avoid a broken heart by not trying to melt down the truest heart that's made of steel.

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Date: 10/13/2013 9:27:00 PM
great win......SKAT
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Date: 10/11/2013 1:40:00 PM
Andrew, Congrats on your placement in the Songs to Poetry contest! I enjoyed!! The strongest metal can be tempered, but yes I agree, it takes time to truly fall in love...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/11/2013 9:10:00 AM
Great choice for the contest..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:45:00 PM
Andrew, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:07:00 PM
great write...one can feel the emotions in your words...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 7:32:00 PM
Very true words here! Nothing feels quite as bad as loving someone who doesn't love you back! Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love
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