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The Trouser Snake

There once was a king cobra called Lance, Who heard music and went in a trance. People thought he was asleep, As his thoughts were so deep. Then he reared up and lunged for their pants. Jack Horne for Dr Ram's Music and Meditation

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2011 8:56:00 PM

your awesome with limericks..Jack.. even if i find any snakes... scarry... i would not trust them for one bit to be asleep... lol... enjoyed...p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Jack. Love, Carol

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/24/2011 2:16:00 AM

HA! Any relation to the "One Eyed Trouser Mouse?"-- ~JSLambert

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/22/2011 1:11:00 AM

Heartiest Congratulations Jack on this wonderful win.Best wishes,Gautami

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2011 11:27:00 PM

Jack, glad to see your amusing little limerick on the list. I do remember that trouser snake! congratulations.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/21/2011 9:47:00 PM

Super take on this contest Jack. Super congrats to you for this win. Have a blessed Easter.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/21/2011 5:41:00 PM

Congrats, Jack. Excellent piece. Nice going. Happy Easter. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/21/2011 5:31:00 PM

Congrats jack on your HM in Dr. Ram's contest.. just luv this one .. enjoy your special honor .. clever my friend..luv it..

John Freeman

Date: 4/21/2011 4:11:00 PM

Way to go Jack, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/21/2011 3:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM in Dr. Ram's Contest, Jack. Happy Eaaster. Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2011 2:46:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in my contest, jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2011 3:09:00 PM

A funny way to make it about music and meditation, Jack.! Funny ending!

James Foulk

Date: 4/17/2011 8:41:00 PM

ouch, that would really smart. Enjoyed this one, brought a smile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2011 5:52:00 PM

Interesting direction in which to go with the challenge..Reads like winning material...Good luck..Thanks for stopping by my work..I am sorry that I was not finished with it..I elaborated on the title some which now reads "New Life Gives Hope"..It is about thoughts that I had at a shower for our daughter's first step grandson...It was born a month early so he was there to be held by everyone at the shower..I am healing..I start PT on Friday..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2011 1:20:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/17/2011 12:10:00 PM

Oh Dr. Ram will get a big laugh from this one Jack..good luck in the contest.. a unique spin on meditation and music luv.. super..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/17/2011 10:43:00 AM

harharhar... gigglingall the way, jack! i was thinking you'll be serious here.. delighted! winning wishes...:) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2011 9:29:00 AM

LOL Very creative approach to the contest, Jack. You had me laughing! Wishing you success in Dr. Ram's contest. I think he'll get a kick out of this entry. Love, Carolyn

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/17/2011 8:28:00 AM

Hahahaha. I like.