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The Trick To Invisibility Finally Revealed

Feeling disjointed--disconnected--a steel wall's been erected, inhaling air in my lungs, words roll off my tongue--I can see their lips moving-- voices disapproving, trying to comprehend amid confusion without end-- act normal--just pretend everything's alright, haven't lost my will to fight, gotta' stay employed as long as I can, yeah, I'm working for the man, but brain surgery ain't free--it's a matter of degree-- how long I'll be out--more than 3 months, no doubt, in false sympathy they nod, then take away my job, TERMINATED-UNDER-RATED-DEVASTATED-BERATED-OUT-DATED and soon UNINSURED, symptoms unheard, class of citizen: THIRD. Wanna' be invisible? I'll tell you the trick: lose your job 'cause you got sick. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/23/2010 8:35:00 AM
Wow- I hope for your sake this was not real. Amazing read...and guess what? That exact same thing happened to me. I pray change is on the way, has to be...can things really get much worse?
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Date: 8/28/2009 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Danielle. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2009 4:49:00 PM
I am so sorry if this is what you are dealing with on top of your illness. So not fair....! (soup mail)
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Date: 8/27/2009 4:05:00 PM
Interesting topic for consideration. Keep writing. Sara
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