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The Trials of Meretrix Canto I

When your befuddled mind Forsakes upon the ragged edge Of swirling darkness; Where eternal night awaits To sate upon purest innocence Besides an open grave! When the gravity of your perils Be foully whispered within Dismayed And abject earshot; Where salvation for despairing souls Be so hopelessly betrayed! Then I wouldst draw ye, Meretrix, As I should draw a sharpened Blade, Fixing you like a point against some Long forgotten star; Nightly pushing my jealous eye Through the convex lens Hidden within the ground and Polished jar: Searching you out, my Meretrix, So many infinite distances away - So many, many light years afar! Thus will I circumnavigate Heavens Turbulent Oceans... When Sailing through the convoluted Worm that coincides Inside a Gravitons diminished tides That still grind upon this cluttered Bar; An indomitable ship made ready And waiting, Pressed hands mustered to do my Bidding... And I, Pensive, coldly deliberating... A man apart, Pouring over tattered parchments Revealing a secret and ancient chart. Let now the keel take the weight Of the dullened anchor So her draft may rise upon the Waves, Point her midships towards open Harbour - Bring down hard the lash Over the breaking backs of my most Submissive slaves! Cast of the hempen Moonbeams From the creaking capstans - For tis your Captain that stands Before all assembled and subjected Company:- Beat the drum roll, Sound the bugle - Helmsman...Swing abouts her rude Prow Into the endlessly, glowering spumes Of the great, spangled sea! So wonder ye, Meretrix, Upon these swelling orbs that Dutifully and daily undertake to climb; Igniting the dark shadows Thrown across alien landscapes Of such variable and strange design; Retreating Moons who leer reflectively When so forcefully compelled to Reluctantly shine. O Majestically rolling spheres Churning with the intensity Of a billion flaming desires! They that penetrate the abysmal Depths, They that thrust into the Secretive lushness of dense and Verdant shires. Cosmic furnaces, Forging thee Essential Elements, Fueled by self-perpetuating fusion Pyres; Spewing forth in Supernova Explosion - Amidst immense rage of Heavenly Fires! Each spinning on a singular point Spun by a hidden, and much Ingeniously confounding, Far more subtler art. The fantastic masses an irresistible Attraction, Upon all celestial bodies, Doth, therefore, by effect, hereby Impart.

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Date: 9/1/2017 8:05:00 AM
I felt the excitement of departure a great adventure of discovery to begin into the unknown. Another poem to explore. I could feel and hear in my mind a great orchestra with clashing cymbals and brass roaring, violins swooping like great sea birds.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/4/2017 2:27:00 PM
Love your comments, Patricia...as always! You have summed up the opening part of the saga very well indeed, this is exactly the sort of emotion and feeling I was trying to impart. The start of a great endeavor! My very best regards, Patricia! :) john
Date: 3/15/2016 3:31:00 AM
A fascinating poem... Julia, :)
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:17:00 AM
Hi, Julia. Hope everything is fine for you...and you are healthy and happy! Thanks for the visit; there is a lot more to come from the meretrix...A lot more! My very best regards and warmest wishes as always, Julia. :) john
Date: 1/19/2016 9:22:00 PM
This is an excellent piece, John, with amazing imagery and rhymes that all flow so well together... Another fine example of your exceptional talents!
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Date: 1/20/2016 2:42:00 AM
Kelly, always the greatest of pleasures to see you appearing on my page - You are, as ever, most welcome! Thank you for your high praise....It is always appreciated. I hope you can stick with it...The Meretrix has such a long way to go! My very best wishes, Kelly! :) john
Date: 1/18/2016 6:15:00 PM
Wow...i feel as if you are trying on Lord Byron's shoes in this masterful undertaking! I am going to be proud one day to say we communicated when you were writing this. Tears of joy to read the genius of your words, are being shed...talk about metaphorical mysteries! Tied yet sensually free. Wow! I can hardly contain my eagerness to read your next Canto! When the work is this good it is well worth a second read. You are a poet of the highest caliber. My best to you always. Connie #7 fave
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Date: 1/19/2016 3:51:00 PM
Dearest Connie. Thank you for your wonderful comments - always so much appreciated! I truly do look forward to your visits...Such a pleasure when I see you appear on my page. You will always be my most favourite commentator! The Meretrix has a long, long, long journey to undertake. I most fervently hope she will not be misunderstood! My very best regards and warmest wishes always, my worthy friend! :) john
Date: 1/12/2016 7:41:00 AM
Certainly sounds like the beginning of an epic. The language is breath taking, but my night is short. Great write.
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:28:00 AM
Hi, Scott. Thanks for the visit and comments. Do not worry about missing out on anything...The Meretrix is all tied up herself at the moment. Lol! My very best regards to you, Scott - Cheers! :) john
Date: 12/30/2015 4:06:00 AM
So this is the epic write you mentioned awhile back. Impressive! I don't go for long writes myself but you do have a way which keeps the reader glued till the last line. If not for the fact that I'm trying to catch up with my replies/reads, I'll proceed to the next canto. Will be back some other time, then. Again, have a great year ahead, John!
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Date: 1/1/2016 7:37:00 AM
Hi, Kim. Firstly, thank you so much for visiting my page...You are always more than welcome here! The poem you have started to read is going to be of truly epic proportion. No...More than that...It is going to be an ongoing thing. I have decided to make it my lives work. Think of it as an Ezra Pound styled "Cantos". I will call it..."The Meretrix chronicles: A trilogy". Many, many thanks Kim. :) john. P.s I was going to say "God bless"...But I think God is going to have to sit this one out!
Date: 12/26/2015 11:30:00 AM
Love the images in this exceptional piece. Wow. Just wow. I admire your work. Truly.
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Date: 12/28/2015 1:27:00 PM
Robyn, allow me to say that it is a pleasure to make your acquaintance - Proud I am sure! Thank you so much for your kind comments; it is very much appreciated! My best regards...And all the very best for the New Year! :) john
Date: 12/26/2015 9:14:00 AM
Exceptional pen and vivid imagery. Although the piece resides in a heavenly ocean the feel of the writing reminds me of "dunes". Well done, I will venture on to Canto II.
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Date: 12/26/2015 10:29:00 AM
You are most perceptive, Richard! Honestly...You are more than right when you make this observation. This will be my crowning glory...My "Cantos" so to speak. It is a battle of wits between seducer and the one he wishes to seduce in any way he can. It is a titanic struggle, not between right or wrong, not between opposing ideologies, but rather between conflicting philosophies. A very strange contradiction in turns I know! What I am going to try and demonstrate is how very thinly drawn the line is between good and evil, wrong or right...If indeed it actually truly does exist! What in fact I am endeavoring to do is show how life is not all black and white...but multiple layers of brilliantly interwoven colours! Of course at the outcome, whatever or however it may turn out to be...There will be a price to pay! My very best regards, Richard! :) john
Date: 12/25/2015 4:20:00 PM
sounds like quite an ambitious project you are undertaking. I don't go for really long poems, but I do admire your intelligence. Your poetry will always be pure eloquence!
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Date: 12/26/2015 7:33:00 AM
Hi, Andrea. That is high praise indeed coming from one so accomplished as your good self...Thank you most kindly! I have edited Canto I...It reads far better now. Please, if you could, read it over again when you have the time...I would, obviously, value your opinion. All the very best, Andrea, and my very warmest regards! :) john

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