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the trees

the trees 
are in blossom - -
i sneeze

For Tracie’s Spring contest

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:03:00 PM
    ohhh Tracies contest...I will go see what she wants..I remember we want to get you away from cause & effect!

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 9/7/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    contest over? well you were not impressed by what you saw Jack it wasn't a haiku moment so it's hard to make a good haiku out of it aye?
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:24:00 PM
    Jack, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:49:00 PM
    JACK, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring Is In The Air" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 11:15:00 AM
    ACHOOO! made me smile. .Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 2:38:00 AM
    Ha ha trust you congrats Jack love it xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:40:00 AM
    curse that hay fever jack, soon be winter, oh dear, got that wrong, i'm still waiting for summer. enjoyed your haiku.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:48:00 AM
    ah choo!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 11:15:00 AM
    ha ha .. gotcha Jack.. super fun read.. good luck luv.. ah choo.. sorry..

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:50:00 PM
    hahaha, talk about an easy way to do the contest, and yet it is charming as can be.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Bravo....very good haiku Jack - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:35:00 PM
    LOL yup I only have one thought to give you..must not do cause and effect for the 3rd line is supposed to be a wee additional surprise! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:20:00 PM
    nicely done.. simple and to the point.. I liked it. good luck in the contest.. have a great day cory

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:08:00 PM
    I'm with Arild on this one, I do sneeze a lot in the Spring...those darn trees are the culprits most of the time too! They are beautiful thought, I do have to say! Your write is truly phenomenal my friend, I loved reading it tonight! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:33:00 PM
    Jack,that sounds like me during the Spring:) Awesome haiku my friend..Arild