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The Tranquil Picnic At Dusk

I’d love to be with you in a canoe accompanied by summer’s softest breeze, enjoying the verdant valley view while drifting on a river lined with trees. Ahead would be a peak that whisks the sky. We’d look above us from our little boat to where the eagle and the osprey fly as in the quiet glow of dusk we’d float. We’d dock on sand and find a cozy spot to roast some hot dogs in our campfire’s heat and spread the luscious picnic foods we’d brought; then relishing tranquility, we'd eat! Amid dark, silent pines, by fire's bright light, we'd snuggle happily into the night. For Carol Brown's "Picnic Time" Contest

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Date: 8/23/2020 11:45:00 PM
You are so talented at this kind of daydreamy tale set in nature and tranquility. Maybe your favorite genre of writing? Love this!
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:47:00 PM
A winner here Andrea..' great scenes indeed my kind of evening..let alone a picknic..!! congratulations..'
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Date: 12/19/2012 10:20:00 AM
you know i really am a sucker for your wonderful sonnet..can't read enough of these...
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:59:00 AM
Loved this beautiful one on picnic.wish to be at one such right now :) Congratulations Andrea on your win. love, gautami
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:59:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn (Wonder who will be voted off Idol tonight -- they're all so amazing!)
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:59:00 PM
Andrea, so great to see you on the winner's list with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:54:00 AM
ANDREA! Of all the entries yours was the one I would like to actually reenact! A romantic canoe ride like ON GOLDEN POND-your version, ON GOLDEN RIVER! Same romantic effect! Should have placed higher. HIgh 5 girl! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your another top 10 win...:)
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:48:00 AM
A top notch entry. Perfect in rhyme and form. Congratulations on a delightful poem Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:08:00 AM
nice mood here, andie... greeeat stuff wiht my hugggy cheers! :)
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Andrea
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:13:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your terrific win in the picnic contest with this lovely write of the tranquil picnic..sounds like me kinda picnic my friend..haha... enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:41:00 AM
Ah, that's like serendipity! Beautiful images and such a lovely cozy spot, to reach there canoeing...Best of luck in the contest Andrea with this winning write..huggs , gautami
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:36:00 AM
Andrea, Is there room for a 3rd person at this picnic? I love canoeing and enjoying the soft summer's breeze. I love birdwatching and watching the sunset over the tall pines along the river banks. This sounds like a winner 2 me! Enjoyed your write. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/8/2011 1:34:00 PM
Loads of contentment in this write of yours Andrea, a lovely entry for Carol's contest ;-) Happy Mother's day Andrea, love Wilma
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Date: 5/8/2011 10:55:00 AM
Wonderful camping picture. I can get into the scene, roasting marshmallows, the dark pines shutting out everything, sleeping bags, the whole bit. HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY. Luck in the conterst. Love, daver
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Date: 5/7/2011 3:42:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Reads like a fun day..I don't know if I could get back up if I got down on the blanket for the picnic..Thanks for the blog visit..We will understand all better later on..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:48:00 PM
A beautifully written and flowing poem. I felt myself there with you.
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:34:00 PM
ooo.. great for the soup and soul.. and tomorrow.. good luck. have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.
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Date: 5/7/2011 12:56:00 PM
A winner my dear Andrea, as always your words inspire beyond the mind... Your comment make me smile and wink..luv Michael
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Date: 5/7/2011 11:42:00 AM
Oy my, how I do wish I was in that canoe. The images of sheer content flowed just as easy as the canoe on crystal clear waters. Followed up by a delicious picnic, McYummy. Good luck in Carol's fine contest Utah Babe. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:34:00 AM
Sounds like a perfect picnic, Andrea. I canoe often and have brought little picnics with me. Beautiful description of the "cozy spot" and delicious treat. Very uplifting poem that will do well in Carol's contest. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:35:00 AM
Sounds like my kinda picnic Andrea.. luv the snuggle happily part into the night.. great menu too luv.. ah the campfire's heat .. awesome ..good luck in the contest ..getting ready to post mine too right now..
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