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The Trade Off

Red bulb casts sultry shadow across the room spilling onto the street air heavy with illicit night scent rain smog weed and jack clinging along for the ride blurry eyed distorted reflection dares you “look up” shoes high with painted toes pulse quickens stockinged legs the pathway to shapely hips and white lace panties silk skims navel and cups breasts dark hair spills tense anticipation fear molten lava veins palms sweat heart pounds in ears feet carry forward musty perfume envelopes and draws into her realm cash binds the deal one night of passion for your probity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/14/2009 5:34:00 PM
probity..never saw this word..THANKS! The form fits the verse nicely! Light & Love
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Date: 5/5/2009 8:33:00 PM
classic kat.... for you legions of poor poets.... thats why she's kat. love u, legend
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Date: 5/4/2009 12:53:00 PM
WOW!!! Your short clipped phrases really make this piece... some unforgettable phrases. You are SO talented!!! Your adoring fan, Keith
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:58:00 AM
Awesome passion..awesome writing..my senses were awaken throughout the piece..lace and navel will do me in any time..great writing.
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Date: 5/2/2009 3:20:00 AM
You paint a vivid portrait. Nicely done
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Date: 5/2/2009 3:02:00 AM
The title is perfect. The sensual images pain me. It hurts, beautifully.
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