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The Time Temple

the time temple ticks and tocks clocks on crooked crosses...like zits get popped like consciesness floods...drowning doomed ones in defeat tick tock...stop the time temple breathes at abomination alters mankind watches and waits... shaken,spun,and stirred by hellacious hurricanes seeking precious stones in jungles...thieves get invited to cannibal feasts war drums bang forever in their damnation dreams tick tock...stop the time temple beats through firey darts and flaming arrows...some still walk that path that's narrow like iron eagles with silver wings and blood red feathers chariots of chaos coming with terror time tick tocks to the sights and the sounds lost in labrynths the serpent hisses shots from guns...blasting long but wrong...still missing fractions of action and figments of all the deaf,dumb,and blind never listen,look,or learn tick tock...stop the time temple burns anthony_beesley@yahoo.com

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Date: 8/12/2010 12:35:00 PM
Hey Anthony: Another great poem. You paint a very interesting picture with you words. I really like the line "some still walk the path that's narrow". Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poetry. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 8/12/2010 11:17:00 AM
Enjoyed this piece of poetry this afternoon and will definantly have to read more from you. Have a great day and these gems coming.
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Date: 8/12/2010 9:01:00 AM
A nice poem on the time temple, anthony
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:59:00 AM
Anthony, welcome to poetry soup, come by and read my poems if you dare, I need a fresh victim...;)
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