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The Thought of You

His eyes are pools of autumn fire An intense gaze, of which I never tire. To drown in their depths a pleasant death He comes in closer, I loose my breath. Our pulses quicken, skin tingles, a live wire. The touch of his hand upon my skin As he looks into my eyes, my thoughts are a sin. Taking me into his strong arms, he holds me Even in his tight embrace, I feel so free. The beat of his heart, is my hearts twin. His breathy voice, whispered into my ear The sound of it excites me, brings me near. The thoughts in my head, vivid imagination The feelings for him a strong fascination. To loose him now is my only fear. The future is an unknown mystery Will I always be alone, will he come to me? With him close to my side I will be complete The sight of him, his touch, will be so sweet. Whatever he wants, whatever he needs...I will be.

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Date: 10/17/2008 5:39:00 PM
This is expressed in a very descriptive way, explaining your love to this man. Very well written. Steven
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/2/2008 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations Kimberly on this love poem "The Thought of You" being featured. Vince
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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Date: 9/1/2008 6:35:00 PM
Kimberly - what a honestly splendid way to write out the emotions of love - just simply a wonderful poem - Congrats on the feature and God Bless
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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Date: 8/31/2008 9:12:00 PM
Intersting reflection on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:48:00 PM
Sounds like you are hooked! Awesome write! Congratulations Kimberly on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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