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The Sweet Smell of Women

The Sweet Smell of Women They walked past me in the cold outdoor café with their silky eyes, smiles and perfume and their scent dropped into my coffee and down my shirt collar but I didn't mind the warm-rain feel of it and in my head I shouted to them ,”come back! come back!,” and I thought I saw them smiling one of those women’s’ smiles that they do and they looked here and there with their soft eyes and waist length hair and chattering heels and the sweet smell of women went out into the street and I sat there naked (so to speak) so to write, so to say…

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Date: 5/21/2015 10:47:00 AM
Oh yes! I love this poem. It's fresh, sexy and honest. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:56:00 PM
Well written laplume
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 5/21/2015 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Pauline....I appreciate your comment...Peter
Date: 5/18/2015 1:35:00 PM
Peter, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 1/9/2015 8:43:00 AM
Courage my friend. Say what you need to. Loved it.
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Date: 1/8/2015 7:03:00 PM
Rather appealing poem...I enjoyed the read! :-) John.
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