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The Swan's Song

Oh swan where is your song That lost woeful cry That last wail of goodbye Your beauty never faded with your life of ferity in cautious humility And as you fly the night sky Your plumage is not confuted Your voice no longer muted Oh swan, here is your song Oh death, where is your sting For that swan, That beautiful swan Still has this song to sing. Adelaide Bond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/8/2016 7:37:00 PM
another well crafted piece of writng - and welcome to the Soup.
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Date: 5/7/2016 8:04:00 PM
Inspiring poem. I even learned a new word from this one, ferity. Thanks for sharing your talent, and if I didn't say it on your other poem, welcome to the soup. -G
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Date: 5/3/2016 9:54:00 PM
Adelaide Evans, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2016 12:13:00 AM
Hi Adelaide, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead. I feel glad to read.......with love.
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Date: 5/1/2016 5:28:00 PM
Adelaide,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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