The Surf

The Surf BREAKS HIGH RESTLESS Angry VIOLENT WHITECAPS People still comb for shells Around the bend Then back again

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2012 3:16:00 PM

love this creative piece, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2012 9:04:00 AM

Very special and well written Sara. (welcome back) Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2012 7:40:00 PM

REally cool how you did this free verse poem. Unique and great imagery.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2012 5:28:00 PM

What a natural way to write about the waves...and looking for shells! This is a remarkable write my friend, I really enjoyed reading this fine write this evening! It's nice to see you back Sara, we've missed you here! I hope you time away was good and was only what you wanted to do! You have written a fantastic poem here, very nicely done! Great Work!!