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The Sunset

The Sunset Our feet fall into the soft sand As we sit on the beach We watch the sunset in awe I look at it and wonder If it looks at us Wanting to have the same feeling of love The sun goes down lonely Everything becomes dark

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Casarah Nance

Date: 6/26/2015 7:30:00 AM

This is very powerful, and nicely done, such a deep thought. I have enjoyed it. And thank you for the soup mail, I'm sorry I couldn't reply for your mail is shut off.

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/6/2015 11:40:00 PM

Thanks for all your support

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 6/26/2015 1:44:00 AM

A lovely thought. Does the sun admire lovers as we admire it? Smiles. Jan

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/6/2015 11:41:00 PM

thanks and maybe it does