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The Sundress

She's got a perfect smile her body an hour glass A beautiful girl in a beautiful sundress And perhaps it's just the dress that gives her that right the right of perfection to my imperfect sight A kind of beauty she doesn't try to show a kind of beauty I will never know Silly to dream of what I'll never be of a dress that will never look that good on me But why can't I wear that dress? That summer came with it a personal promise 3 seasons and 60 pounds at last I am the beautiful girl In the beautiful sundress by: Nicole Hawkins written for The Sundress contest*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/9/2011 6:07:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Nicole in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:44:00 PM
Walking, walking, walking! and only ate "badly" on the weekends. A great trick is to always eat half. as in half a sandwich or half the cookie. save the other half for later. Drink LOTS of water. its not always easy but once you get it in your head it will become natural, especially when you see the results! I wish you the best. -Nicole
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:04:00 AM
I can't wear sundresses, Nicole. How did you lose the weight? Some of us are really struggling. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:58:00 AM
Congrats Nicole on your win in the contest.Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nicole in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:50:00 PM
CHEERS for plaing well in this contest, nicole... really nice! :)huggs, nette
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:58:00 PM
This is such an uplifting poem on willpower, Nicole :) Enjoyed reading this and Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Nicole
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congrats Nicole on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. with this awesome write and entry.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:13:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Nicole. The best to you in the contest. May you have a beautiful week of good health, love and baskets overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2011 5:09:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 3/27/2011 2:20:00 PM
enjoyable write, I think i will take your lead and loose a few lbs! inspiring. Light & love
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