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The Struggle of Life

The struggle of life......... The battle is not over, either the peace is not dead Between the struggle of life is a pain in the world The objects are not achieved either the struggle have brought triumph Between the two walls of hatred, life still found horrible The games are played in the battlefield with human life while God is kept as an Umpire In the battlefield men grapple each other and die and bring glory for his country just for nothing We are human creature and our life is a great mystery And day to day we are living with paralyzing fear Our life is so much of struggle without peace and sweeping with confused thoughts. We travel different journeys with different paths Our journey is either short or long but never meant to stay for ever But during our stay we have to find a peace of life and it is only possible through the Kingdom of Heaven. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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Date: 6/9/2013 8:25:00 PM
Ravi...this write feels to me like a prayer...thank you....
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Date: 6/8/2013 7:41:00 PM
Wonderful work, Ravi! And yes, war never brings peace and the peace each of us longs for comes only from God. Great insight and wisdom. This goes to my favorites! Always, Annalise
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:19:00 AM
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Date: 6/8/2013 10:06:00 AM
Your words are tied together wonderfully to create a powerful message of working toward peace in the world. The battlefield is the destruction of our purpose here :)
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:19:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 5:59:00 PM
very nice, ravi. And it's nice knowing you are from Sri Lanka. I just did a poem about my Indian friends, but you are probably very closely related to that area of the world.
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:19:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 2:16:00 PM
a graceful piece filled with a sense of harmony and words that offer much grace.. great work!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:20:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 4:39:00 AM
You and I back in here are both victims of struggle without peace. Lets prey together That all of us find true peace in this human world before we enter the place where we find ultimate peace. Good writing. well versed.Thank you for your encouraging comments. Hugs/manelw
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:20:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 4:11:00 AM
Great work that expresses your faith..Enjoyed reading ...Someday when the Prince Of Peace comes man will be at peace also..Thanks for your visit..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:20:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:45:00 AM
Great wisdom incorporated into well structured poem. A nice result is worth the read... Well done, my friend.... Jake
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:20:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:10:00 AM
Amen, my friend! We have to fight for a better world! I have written many poems on the subject! Well written and thought-provoking!
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:21:00 AM
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Date: 6/3/2013 1:55:00 AM
- There will always be struggles and strife in the world - let's try to spread love and peace around us. - A very well written poem my friend Ravi. - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:21:00 AM
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