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The Struggle

i see people dying in the streets families have no food to eat while rich are living high of the dog there are people struggling trying to find decent jobs i see people going out there commiting crimes young children dying before there time i mean what did we do to deserve this seeing are people die for no perpose i mean let me speek the the truth at times is there is no some hope for to days youth i say this because there are kids out there saling drugs smoking bud and it bugs me how they are trying to be like these images you see on tv when all they need is a dose of reality actuality this is not the way its sopose to be its no good for me its pathetic to see how this could ever be so much poverty and animosity possibly not just effecting us localy in our own community but also nationaly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 12:30:00 PM
such harsh reality. soon suffering will end
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tanisha. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:28:00 PM
I njoyed the piece. Keep writing
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Date: 4/11/2010 11:04:00 AM
so true very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:44:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. so enjoyed reading your creative write...luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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