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The Story Told - Free Fall

Trouble filling up a glass halfway spilt destined to dismantle a seeping mind thought once to be one of a kind but lately left behind books beaming with success slipping off her dress uncovering secrets hidden deep making me weep knowledge known to make a man but too much gets you the frying pan when whispers are told about growing old maid in a minute a minuet in triple time anyway you spin it you think we cant tell oh go to hello in your cap just another feather let's talk about the weather a lion lying upon the rough rock thoughts only of a twisted clock guarding the den of iniquity then read the riot act lost in a book of facts don't lie goodbye yellow brick road the story's been told *for Frank's Zany contest*

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Date: 12/7/2016 8:54:00 AM
Fun play on words Tim. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 12/4/2016 3:03:00 PM
I just love how this rhymes Tim. If this is for the zany contest, then I throw in my feathered cap.
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Jean Murray
Date: 12/7/2016 1:40:00 PM
Told you so!
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Jean Murray
Date: 12/7/2016 1:39:00 PM
Told you so!
Date: 12/2/2016 12:44:00 PM
Eating mushrooms again? A really fun read, Tim:)
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Date: 12/2/2016 9:14:00 AM
This is fantastic Tim. One of the best I have read this morning!
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:50:00 AM
Owwww, I am still thinking about Frank's contest, but YOU my friend made the zaniest poem ever, melikes. Free fall... in poems... Good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/1/2016 10:13:00 PM
I liked it when I first read it, and now that I read it a few times, I think I like it more! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/2/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks...I was worried it was too complicated for most to figure out
Date: 12/1/2016 8:04:00 PM
Now that is QUITE The zany one, Tim. You really caught the vision. Probably gonna score high. I just did footles for him, not posted yet. Sure hope I can make the list!
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Date: 12/1/2016 3:32:00 PM
Excellent thought provoking poem. I think you have a winner here. Good luck.
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Date: 12/1/2016 2:49:00 PM
Wow that is quite the poem Tim.! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 12/1/2016 2:46:00 PM
Always well written poems you provide my friend, Tim! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 12/1/2016 2:23:00 PM
- Very well done, Tim - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2016 1:50:00 PM
That's what I would call zany Tim. That was a trip. Good luck my friend.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 1:52:00 PM
I put the seatbelt on and drove off the cliff...lol

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