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The Story of You

I could hear my own heart beating So strong the rhythm grew It echoes like thunder as it tells me the story of you. You surround yourself in mystery You've been hurt so many times Falling with all you are For some scoundrel's nursery rhymes . He has taken all he wanted Then discarded you aside He made you feel so worthless You were all torn up inside. All the love and trust you gave Was thrown back in your face So you hide away your feelings In a very secret place . Now its my turn to hold you My arms around your waist Swaying to the music As wary lips I taste . We talk and walk for hours The days soon turn to weeks Love and its healing powers Return the colour to your cheeks . The lips that were so wary Are now synchronised with mine The poetry of romance Replacing unfeeling nursery rhyme . You put aside the pain of betrayal Once more the passion burns and with each day that passes A little more of you returns . I am turning over the pages Every hour I learn something new As my heart narrates the story and reveals the mystery of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/22/2014 12:06:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment
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Date: 5/21/2014 6:41:00 PM
Hi Darren, wow..is this another collaboration. This is awesome, stunning + breathtaking... XOX~ Linda
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2014 11:30:00 AM
You can't improve on perfection Darren! hugs Jan xx
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Darren Watson
Date: 5/22/2014 4:19:00 AM
Thank you , This is my own work Linda , I do love collaborations and I'm sure this would have been better had I collaborated but I enjoyed writing it anyway.
Date: 5/21/2014 4:23:00 PM
Awesome, I love the last stanza, way to hit it home. good job :)
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:47:00 AM
I must say...This is exquisite in every way! Lovely write.
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:45:00 AM
very awesome and creative poem
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Date: 5/21/2014 7:43:00 AM
WOW!!!.. this is a perfect 10, Daz!!! Very well written... Great penned!!! :O))
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Date: 5/21/2014 7:20:00 AM
Very beautiful and heartfelt Darren...wonderful write Tim
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Date: 5/21/2014 6:00:00 AM
Simply Perfection Darren - I can truly relate to this..Off to favourites it goes! Hugs as ever my wonderful friend. Jan xxx
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