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The Stick Pin

The Pressure of A Pin ... Is That Its Outside - It Wants In The Pressure of A Friend ... If They're Outside - They Want In The Pressure of The Wind ... Its Outside - It Wants In The Pressure To Be Thin ... Outside The Crowd - You Want In The Pressure Just To Win ... Show The World - It Burns Within The Pressure of All Men ... ... Com' On Girls - Don't Pretend! & Read The Pressure of This Grin & Let It Out - If Its In Written & Copyrighted ©: 9/12/2013 by: MoonBee Canady

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Date: 9/14/2013 11:01:00 PM
The workout of this concept "want in" is fully discovered in your genius mind! jimbo
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Moonbee Canady
Date: 9/15/2013 1:58:00 PM
ha ha ... Jimmy, I was in a moronic day that day - my sister had to lock me away from her to keep me from spouting inanities ... but I'm gonna tell her, I got a vote of confidence & a certificate of sanity from Jimbo hahaha ... Much peace today to you ... MoonBee

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