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Within the first moment of loving him, the stars Fell silent in a soft whispers hush, mine beloved, Sent from the spiritual gardens above, was this Precious rose, whom pierced my heart with cupids Thorny prong’s of devotion. A melting comet descends, shattering my frozen Crystalized soul within, for loving him I thus live Again, and am renewed showed by his sacred Petals of tenderness. Passion’s fire in the blue skies of his eyes I’m So lost, drowning heart first within seductions Universe, divinities cascading shards of pleasure Clasp as shooting stars singing our silken sheets Of forever. Silvered pieces of stardust dart above us, As we promise our vows beneath the vast Canvas of heaven, for in loving him two separate Half’s have become whole, I’ve found the eying to My yang, forming perfections circle of enlightenment. Interconnecting vines woven around my emotions, Blossom with blooms of his budding devotion, In loving him I’ve found roots nourishment, Growing stronger by his shinning smile, And sunshine’s rays of everlasting kisses. Oh do not the lords of the galactic universe, Dancing within the fields of the twilight hour, In tune with our wedding march, in timeless Reflections do the pools of the moon, Ripple with the hushed silence, as two Lovers walk beneath them in reverences After glow. For in loving him, I’ve found my hero of Companionship, devotion, and soul mate. He is the lucky star that guides the rhythms Pathway forward and where he goes I Shall follow always. Within the first moment of loving him, the stars Fell silent in a soft whispers hush, mine beloved, Sent from the spiritual gardens above, was this Precious rose, whom pierced my heart with cupids Thorny prong’s of devotion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/11/2015 11:36:00 PM
and in that moment the earth stands still, such a passionate write full of love P.D.
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:13:00 PM
Awesome :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:14:00 PM
There's a hush in my heart as I reached the last line, Cheri. Superlatively beautiful write, this is. The beloved would surely fall in love with the poet more, once he reads this...7+. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim
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Date: 2/21/2015 1:39:00 PM
This poem is an absolutely beautiful story filled with love and warm human feelings. The author skillfully brought the reader into the story and we felt comfortable. Emotional words carry the most weight when you make the reader feel them as well as hear them and you have done this so well. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/20/2015 10:44:00 PM
Wow!! But your work is always a wow to me, :) “As we promise our vows beneath the vast Canvas of heaven, I’ve found roots nourishment “. Words of a loving soul, Cherl, a 7 blessings eve
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Date: 2/20/2015 10:12:00 PM
This, this is some excellent writing my friend.
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