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THE STAR OF OUR UNIVERSE

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THE STAR OF OUR UNIVERSE

Isn't the brilliant sun the star
of our Universe? Doesn't it rise
at sunrise and brightens clouds?


The sun is a life-giver,
it nourishes with its warm rays
everything beneath this sky...
be grateful as I!

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  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:06:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Andrew. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 9:01:00 AM
    Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, andrew

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:54:00 AM
    Congrats Andrew on the win . A brilliant one indeed.