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The Spirit of Wisdom

Just as clear as a whistle Hear Her words of wisdom Though it is but a whisper. Just as clear as the Caribbean Sea See the depth of Her charisma Though it is but an ethereal plea. Just as clear as the sturdiness of trees Feel the strength of Her purpose Though it is but a stir in the breeze. Just as clear as a bolt of lightening Feel the charge of Her bold energy Though it is but a jolt of reckoning. Just as clear as the azure sky With her, be on the path of a sure future Though it is but a luring light. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 07.09.10

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Date: 7/9/2010 8:46:00 PM
You are getting really good at these Caroline!Like the repetition of the clear idea!
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Date: 7/9/2010 7:47:00 PM
Incredible imagery, Caroline. We are all drawn to that "luring light." If we follow the right path, we reach it and find eternal bliss. May the light always guide you to God's home, Caroline. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:11:00 AM
Yes, personification. A wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 7/8/2010 11:10:00 PM
HI, Caroline, I need to set your mind at ease about my poem. IT was pure personification about summer. It is not about any person, but I am glad you enjoyed it. I think this one here is personification too? Nicely done on Wisdom, dear. LUv, Andrea
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