The Spiral Staircase

the spiral staircase leads to Anabella's room dark spider webs dust

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/29/2015 5:25:00 AM

Interesting :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/23/2015 10:21:00 PM

I love these mysterious and gothic kinds of poems. This is a great one, Rajat. Very atmospheric!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2015 5:05:00 PM

eerie one. makes you wonder who Anabella is. Maybe the one Nadiya mentions?

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/23/2015 4:19:00 PM

It somehow reminded me of the mad woman in the attic... nice pen friend.. #7.

David Meade

Date: 1/23/2015 12:13:00 PM

I wonder if she knows Charlotte . . . I have seen these spider webs dance upon the wind and sprinkle in the dewy sunshine! Love my dear dear friend. Peace and love always. 7

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2015 8:51:00 AM

The first sentence reminds of the staircase I saw in Louvre, Paris