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The Sphere In Trouble

We are in bad times Army of violent clouds Clashing fiercely in the sky With golden lashes Beating rumbling monster drums Deadly pandemonium Our wonderful sphere Is lonely in trembling fear Aylan, the child in ocean ________________________________ July 21, 2016 Syllable structure:5-7-7, 5-7-7, 5-7-7 Checked withhowmanysyllables.com

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Date: 7/24/2016 5:36:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/25/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/24/2016 3:23:00 PM
Hi Probir, It's good to see you on the winner's list. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/25/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Alexis ...
Date: 7/24/2016 8:57:00 AM
yes the world is in trouble Probir - great choka congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/25/2016 12:26:00 AM
Thanks Jan
Date: 7/23/2016 7:30:00 PM
The world is surely in trouble, Probir. Well written and congratulations. Thanks for being in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/24/2016 4:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Janis ...
Date: 7/21/2016 2:51:00 PM
filled with biting reality yet beautifully scribed, probir... keep up the good stuff!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/22/2016 5:55:00 AM
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:05:00 AM
What a nice poem, Probir, the use of words descriptions to play a roll. I am going to have to try this form. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/21/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thank you Eve ...Love ... Probir ...
Date: 7/21/2016 9:04:00 AM
So nice sir:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Madhu ...
Date: 7/21/2016 7:02:00 AM
Sparkling gems of Choka inspiring with their poetic splendor dear friend, Probir. 7-7-7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/21/2016 7:18:00 AM
Thank you ... Regards ...

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